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Teacher Critique /touch up Students' works Before &After
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1.Add Crimson at left top corner - push back more shadow 2. add purple - vase pops out 3. add shadow under flowers 4. add pink at
left side of vase 5. add yellow at left bottom corner - vase's edge softer, etc. |

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1. Left one with back legs in the air, should add more
dust 2. tail should blow in sync. 3. add active muscle movement 4. add
white or crimson so clouds more colorful 5.
add yellow ochre to sands, under horses and waterline 6. add white to wave 7. waves at far should be more blur; to correct using dry brush with white
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1. add blue and red to its ears 2. add blue to left leg
3. add yellow ochre between fence to bring out fence
4. add hairs on head and white at right side by the ear 5, add green by eyes
to bring them out 6. add white to space under right foot & between
feet - add dimension 7. add yellow ochre or red to wood, bring out
more color contrast |