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3/6/2008 Thursday class (Teacher Mrs. Janice Chen)

Too many clusters of clouds. Clouds normally move at similar direction	After minor  touch-up	No shadow of the vase on table.  The vase appears floating  in the air.	The sharp edges of the flowers need to be softened.	The left front boat is the focus point. It needs more details and highlighted with lighter/darker value. The flying birds appear too "big" .	The bottom part of the rose should have more shadow. The bud is too small. Its size should be doubled.	After minor touch-up on the rose
The focus point is the flowers, not the table clothes	After minor touch-up	The tree on the right can be eliminated. The branches of the tree on the left need to be sized down.	Original	After minor touch-up