
Add linseed oil and white to highlight some of the grapes. |

Too many flowers on the top of the painting create an unsteady feeling
for the vase |
Eliminate some flowers. Make the stand
rectangular , not round, in shape.
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Flowers outsides the dark lines need to be painted as part of background
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Painting looks too "busy" and makes viewers "dizzy". |
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