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Add a little water on (oil) pastel to smooth the edge of the
flowers/limbs (middle right)----> |
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<---The color of background mountains is not correct.---> |
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The tree trunks are too slender. The left edge of the road
too straight. Consider making changes so that left front tree where the sun
lit is the focal point.----> |
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The hair is too dark, making it "heavy" on the rest of the
painting. Add a little red color to the eye corners---> |
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<----The girl body is too small in relation to her head |
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<----The size of boat needs to be reduced. The colors of the
flowers in left mid and back ground are too bright. |
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<--Where is the focal point? The size needs to be reduced if
the boat isn't. Move the background building toward left if it isn't.--> |
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<----Emphasize the different degree of "value" |
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<----The background behind the hanging clothes needs to be
much darkened.---> |
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The reflection on the right front needs to be changed
from horizontal to vertical in direction.----> |
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