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  Add a little water on (oil) pastel to smooth the edge of the flowers/limbs (middle right)---->
<---The color of background mountains is not correct.---> The tree trunks are too slender. The left edge of the road too straight. Consider making changes so that left front tree where the sun lit is the focal point.----> The hair is too dark, making it "heavy" on the rest of the painting. Add a little red color to the eye corners--->
<----The girl body is too small in relation to her head <----The size of boat needs to be reduced. The colors of the flowers in left mid and back ground are too bright. <--Where is the focal point? The size needs to be reduced if the boat isn't. Move the background building toward left if it isn't.-->
<----Emphasize the different degree of "value" <----The background behind the hanging clothes needs to be much darkened.---> The reflection on the right front  needs to be changed from horizontal to vertical in direction.---->